My friend wanted me to write a poem on nature for her 3rd grade daughter's school assignment. As I had barely a few minutes to do this (she had to memorize and recite it as well), I was not sure how much can a child say about nature. So here it is, nature, from an 8 year old's view.
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NATURE
My dear trees,
oceans, mountains,
Please pause for a
moment to hear my concerns.
Grandfather says it
is'nt raining as it used to, these days;
Neighbour uncle
worries about the scorching heat waves;
I know not what
they mean,
But I understand,
what is now is'nt like what had been.
Mother tells about
the small chirping morning sparrows,
Which I have seen,
only in library books that I borrow.
Father talks about
dwindling numbers of tigers,
For me, a mere comparison of facts and figures.
We must nurture our
nature,
Says my teacher.
I promise to keep
you clean, green and in tact my dears,
Donot make me
mumble over your absence, in my later years.
This is beautiful, Vaishnavi. I can completely see a young child saying this with confidence and love :) Beautifully rendered!
ReplyDeleteOh really?! I wasn't confident if this would suit a child of that age but now I feel yes, after hearing from a much efficient writer and mother :) Thankyou shailaja!
ReplyDeleteNot bad at all for a hasty attempt.How did the child do?
ReplyDeleteI guess she said fairly well. Awaiting her result from school...
ReplyDeleteWell done, Vaishu matha!
ReplyDeleteThankyou abirami!
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